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The bustling of the crowd
Jostling of the bags
A kick gone unnoticed
The blank stares received

They wouldn’t know
If you were here today
Or gone tomorrow
Or if you even existed

You are just another body
Breathing precious air
Taking up too much space
Bothering someone else

The quick connect
The risen hopes
The glance away
Dashed to pieces

You decide it doesn’t really matter
Sign the note
Slit the wrist
You know you won’t be missed

Take a breath, close your eyes
Know you made the right choice
You were just another hollow cast
Taking up someone else’s space
©2003-2009 ~endofeternity
:iconendofeternity:

Author's Comments

Wrote this today while sitting in the union...not a new concept by any means but it was just one of those days today...

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:icontheft-of-thought:
damn girl this was awesome.. see you a great poet. i just wrote a new peice and this blows it outte the water... awesome... your amazing... keep it up and i love this one saw nothing bad bout it. keep it up...
love,
zackh
:iconpetroleumjelly:
Well, this will be my first comment, but it is well deserved. I can completely emphasize with this poem, and I've been meaning to write one very much like it -- except without the extremity at the end, lol. In any case, great poem.
:iconsilent-screamer:
This is so sad ... and yet such a good poem
Your an awsome poet
But I hope you're feelin okay...
:icontryingtobe:
oh how I love this.

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Everything has beauty... just not everyone sees it.

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September 30, 2003
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