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All Deviations
All Deviations


That orange sunset
That blinds so bright when driving

A cheek resting on the cool pillowcase
For two hours before the final

The fragility of a dying child
Set deep in the heart of ICU

Raw, unabashed and unflinching
The pain and awkwardness it brings

Peace that surrounds and comforts
Amid the knowledge of ever occurring chaos

In the eye of the beholder
Past the cataracts and myopia

In the heart, pulsing and beating
Valves working in perfect harmony

In the essence of another
More dear to you than life itself

The innocence of a young child
Waving the streamer at the drug lord

In the inquisitive and intelligent mind
Slow to assume yet quick to think

In the color coded shelves of scents
And lotions that moisturize

Pale pink nail polish dried just perfectly
And how it matches the color on your toes

You find it in the fridge
Chocolate pudding under a layer of whipped cream

The black notes printed on white paper
And the magic of the sound they produce  

In the blackness of the night
Highlighted by twinkling and falling stars

In the Alpha and the Omega
His words printed on crumbling parchment

Ink drawn on paper to create words
Some tear stained and smeared

The sand you’ve dug your toes into
That’s slowly becoming wet with the rising tide

At the Sally Beauty Supply store
And within the self, where bought items don’t make a difference.

It catches me by the throat,
Then breathes deeply into my lungs
Leaving me unable to exhale,
And bursting at the seams at the same time.

Forces me to look within,
To search for the beauty I know I hold.
To ignore the ugliness that I seem to find,
And accept the fact that

We are,
It is,

I am,

The epitome of beauty.
©2004-2008 ~endofeternity
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It is important to read this as if the ‘I’ refers to whoever is reading this instead of it referring to the writer. If you choose to comment on this piece, please add where you find beauty. I’ll update with a newer version if I get more examples.

Thank you Mom, Halley, Taylor, Cindy, Travis, Nate, Dad, Paul, Pat, Mallory, Ryan, Cassie, Ashleigh, ~hellobeautiful , and the counselor at CAPS for showing me where they find beauty in life so I could see it as well.

Thank you Chris for showing me the beauty in myself.
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~putrefy:iconputrefy: Jul 26, 2004, 9:24:58 PM
*stares wide eyed*

You speak dreams into a mind thats weak to breath.

I miss you.

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~krystletwystd:iconkrystletwystd: Jul 27, 2004, 7:38:57 AM
Wow. Gorgeous piece, though really, if you want the "i" read as the reader, it should really be "you," shouldn't it?
~ImmortalSlayer:iconImmortalSlayer: Jul 27, 2004, 10:49:13 AM
*tear* Tar, the only beauty I see is in this poem, and how one can put useless, meaningless words onto a piece of paper and make them mean something, make people stop and think, reflect upon their lives. I enjoyed reading this poem more than anything else, I think. :hug: Miss you babe. I'm going to note you in a bit with my phone # so you can call me sometime. It will be nice to talk again.

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I used to stand for something
Now I'm on my hands and knees
Traded my god in for this one
And he signs his name with a capital G
~sundome:iconsundome: Jul 27, 2004, 1:12:55 PM
wow thast realllllllllly good! *dances
~endofeternity:iconendofeternity: Jul 27, 2004, 10:04:23 PM
thank you so much. Give you a call when you send me the area code. :D

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~endofeternity:iconendofeternity: Jul 27, 2004, 10:06:13 PM
You've left me speechless...thank you so much.

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"And then I stabbed him in the eye with a pencil!"
~endofeternity:iconendofeternity: Jul 27, 2004, 10:07:27 PM
No, because you are the reader and you have to read it with the mentality that you are the one saying all this...if that makes any sense. Thanks very much for the compliment.

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"And then I stabbed him in the eye with a pencil!"
~endofeternity:iconendofeternity: Jul 27, 2004, 10:09:40 PM
thank you. I appreciate your comment.

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"And then I stabbed him in the eye with a pencil!"
~ImmortalSlayer:iconImmortalSlayer: Jul 28, 2004, 11:33:23 AM
Yeah. that might help, hunh?

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~Obey-Me

I used to stand for something
Now I'm on my hands and knees
Traded my god in for this one
And he signs his name with a capital G